Dateline: in the basement in Portsmouth RI, 12 November 2004
Finished the Esquire article for Mark Warren today. It rang in at just over 4,000 wordsóby design. Five hundred to open, roughly a thousand per the three main sections (Iraq/Middle East, China/Taiwan, and North Korea), and then 500 to finish. Looking at the piece this morning, I ended up cutting out a lot of parenthetical expressions (something I'm almost compulsive about in first drafts!) that were either too cute (recently, I can't resist jokes about the American Civil War for some reason) or just plain too rude (never make a crack about another person's kids).
Having done the opening, plus the sections on Iraq/Middle East and China/Taiwan, today I wrote the final section on North Korea and the closer. All in all the piece emerged without much effort or angst, which for me is usually a good sign, but Iíll await Mark's verdict tomorrow at O'Hare (we both arrive around 0830). My guess is the usual will happen: he'll cut about 25% and ask me to add in that much new stuff plus another 25% above that. He often rearranges the big pieces in ways that amaze me in the logic revealed (I don't pretend that I "get" myself better than anyone else, only that I write the first draft).
Today was a weird mix at work. First a meeting with representatives from the Office of Naval Research concerning possible collaborations. It was an interesting exchange and then I signed a copy of PNM for one of the visitors, a lady who had arranged my keynote to ONR's 2002 conference, a tale I relate in PNMóby the way.
Then I went out to lunch with a couple of energy experts representing a South African company that's pushing a new form of nuclear technology called Pebble Bed Modular Reactors (a very interesting tale all its own, that I will relate in the future once I peruse the material they left me). They had come all the way up from Washington just to brief me on the company and its work, which was very flattering and a bit bewildering. Their explanation, however, made me feel pretty good: they saw PNM as an overarching strategic concept that helped them link their argument for this new energy technology to sustainable economic development in the Gap, so the book had become a strange sort of marketing tool for them. I mean, if you can use PNM to help sell a new energy technology, then it really is "reproducible strategic concept."
Last up was an almost two-hour phone interview with Alex Steffen of WorldChanging.com, which should result in a substantial posting on their well-traveled site that explores new issues in global economic development.
I will sign off for the weekend now, as I'm not taking my laptop with me to Wisconsin for my Packer weekend trip with Mark Warren. Tomorrow we drive to Green Bay from Chicago and hit the Packer Hall of Fame, plus have dinner at Curly's Pub in the stadium. The game on Sunday doesn't start until 3pm, which is nice. Monday, on the way starting back, we pick up our new Chesapeake Bay Retriever female puppy at a kennel just south of Green Bay, quite close to where I was born in 1962 in a modest town called Chilton. Since my family moved from Chilton only a few months after my birth, I don't have any memory of the place, and yet it will be nice to return once again. I'll have to take a picture with my phone!
Here's the happy news I got from Putnam this week: every November Amazon posts a host of Editors' Picks of best books for the year as part of their marketing for the holiday season (ka-ching!). There's a general Top 50 and then a slew of Top 10 for a variety of genres. PNM made the Top 10 list for Current Events, which was, as you might imagine, a hotly contested group in the news-intensive year.
Here's what Amazon said in their posting found here:
Best Books of 2004
Top 10 Editors' Picks: Current Events
Current events in 2004 meant one thing more than anything else, and our list of the year's ten best is full of accounts of what led up to the Iraq War, the war itself, and its aftermath. At the top is the most authoritative of these, Bob Woodward's Plan of Attack, in which the legendary investigate reporter used his unprecedented access to the tight-lipped Bush White House to paint a picture of the preparations for war so balanced that Republicans and Democrats were each claiming it for their own cause. See more editors' picks and customers' favorites in our Best of 2004 Store.
Actually, the fact that my book's not exactly about the Iraq War (although I do talk about it at some length) makes it's inclusion a bit more impressive, but as you glance down the list, really only about half the books center on Iraq. I tell you what, though, I dare you not to name PNM as the most optimistic and forward-looking of the ten books on this list!
Here's the list in full:
1. Plan of Attack, by Bob Woodward
2. Ghost Wars, by Steve Coll
3. The Sorrows of Empire, by Chalmers Johnson
4. The Fall of Baghdad, by Jon Lee Anderson
5. A Pretext for War, by James Bamford
6. The Pentagon's New Map, by Thomas P.M. Barnett
7. The End of Oil, by Paul Roberts
8. The Outlaw Sea, by William Langewiesche
9. Power, Terror, Peace, and War, by Walter Russell Mead
10. Nuclear Terrorism, by Graham Allison
Of course, when you look at such a list, the first thing you notice are all the books that didn't make it, but somehow managed to get reviews in the New York Times or Washington Post, neither of which occurred for PNM. In fact, I'd almost bet that PNM is the only book on that list not to be reviewed by both papers, which makes its inclusion here all the more important for sales.
After C-SPAN, I guess I'd have to say I like Amazon a whole helluva lot!
Speaking of C-SPAN, it looks like they may run either the BookNotes or the American Perspectives taping of the brief again sometime before Xmas. We are negotiating the idea of a live, in-studio call-in effort involving me immediately after the prime-time broadcast. Since I'll only be in DC on the evenings of the 5th, 6th, and 7th of December between now and Xmas, one of those nights may well be the date. Then again, a special trip may be in order, although I hope not, since I am rather sick of traveling.
Hmm, that reminds me. I need to go upstairs and pack for my Packer weekend. Up early for the plane.
Wish me luck. I am on a two-game losing streak at Lambeau (Eagles last year on MNF game I attended with brother-in-law Todd and Sunday Giants game this year that I attended with my Kevin). Warren better be the charm!
See you Tuesday.